Line 2 - the possibilities of Sophia Dominique Blue's.) is based on a true story.



line 2 correction- the possibilities of Sophia Dominique Blue's life.) is based on a true story.



Line 4 - city to another and the struggles of the environments of the two cities



Line 4 Correction - city to another. Sophia tells her story of the struggles she encountered in the two environments.



Line 5 - that she to deal with. She had no one that she felt she could trust protect



Line 5 correction- that she had to deal with. She had no one that she thought would protect



Line 12 planned to beat the odds and use her struggles as a stepping stone to

Line 12 correction - planned to beat the odds. Sophia had used her struggles as a stepping stone to